Soryo Fuyumi - Mars, vol. 01-15 (Eng. trans.) (reread)

[oyceter]

Mars is one of the earlier shoujo series I read, and it's one of the earlier shoujo series to be brought over to the US in translation. This was my first time reading the English translation, but the language of the Chinese translation I originally read and the language of the English translation are both fairly unremarkable, so I didn't have as varied of an experience as I did with, say, Angel Sanctuary.

Aso Kira is quiet, terminally shy, and devoted to her art, but she's also bullied by the girls at school. Kashino Rei is just the opposite in personality, although equally as devoted to motorcycles and motorcycle racing. They meet-cute in a park, and while Kira is terrified of talking to him because of his bad-boy reputation, she uncharacteristically overcomes her shyness and ends up asking him to model for her.

This series is an odd combination of quiet character moments and Gothic romance/horror, which Soryo mixes together more successfully with her later series Eternal Sabbath (ES). Even so, I ate this up with a spoon the first time I read it. There's revelation upon revelation about Rei's past, along with a few psychopaths, mental trauma, and parental disapproval. My favorite things about the series is how Rei and Kira actually talk to each other, how Soryo doesn't forget about Rei's friendship with Tatsuya and Kira's eventual friendship with a girl in her class. I also like the explorations of hate and anger, particularly with Kira.

My biggest beef with the series (aside from now rolling my eyes at some of the subplots, particularly the early one about Rei's old girlfriend) is similar to my problem with many shoujo series. Rei's story eventually eclipses Kira's; he not only gets more angst and action and stuff to do, much of the focus ends up being on what he feels and why, with Kira there to provide support only. We don't even get much of Kira's POV on being the support, particularly near the end. Kira does get some angst later on, but it's pretty telling that the last shot of the series is of Rei alone, looking up to an empty sky. (I think? I returned it to the library so I can't double check.)

Still, I like that Soryo is committed to portraying the two in a working, evolving relationship, as opposed to drawn-out misunderstandings and other reasons to keep the couple apart. I especially like watching Kira grow throughout the series; Rei does give her strength, but a lot of what she accomplishes is on her own terms, even though it's often sidelined.

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Comments

[magicnoire.livejournal.com]

I once had a discussion with someone who started reading Mars but stopped after the first volume. When I asked her why, she said she didn't see the point of reading a shoujo romance series in which the couple gets together at the end of volume 1. And I think that crystallized why I like Mars so much. I've said I'm a shounen girl in the past and part of that is because many shoujo romances I've attempted to read depend on contrived storylines and misunderstandings to keep the couple apart, and I don't like contrivance. I liked the fact that Mars is less a story of how the couple gets together, and more a story about how the couple stays together.

I do agree, though, that majority of Mars is All About Rei.

[oyceter]

I liked the fact that Mars is less a story of how the couple gets together, and more a story about how the couple stays together.

Yes, exactly! Not only are the contrivances annoying, they also make me wonder if the couple will actually stay together, given that they're usually so quick to distrust each other. That's actually one reason why I like Coffee Prince so much; there's a lot of postponing of the relationships, but there's also a lot of examination of how couples negotiate and communicate and compromise.

Er, sorry! My obsession is spilling over into everything.

But yeah, I really wish more shoujo (or romance novels or romantic comedies and etc) would look at how relationships work, because that's the part I actually find interesting. Also, I thought it was the part of the series that held up very well; the Gothic horror stuff doesn't really once you know what's going to happen, but the character moments still ring true.

[ginny-t.livejournal.com]

… and I see no point in reading 20 volumes of manga to have the couple get together in the last chapter. *shudder*

Some of the twists of Mars are indeed irritating (fortunately it was also one of my first, so I was more tolerant), but it's great to see two people working on a relationship.

[oyceter]

I was really happy to see how well Mars held up to a reread! I was scared that I originally liked it only because it was one of the first shoujo series I've read, but aside from the Gothic melodrama, I do really like Soryo's portrayal of Rei and Kira's relationship.