Nice review. You brought up pretty much everything I have though about the book. Was it just me or were the deaths handled poorly? I don't think any of them really had the proper amount of time and tension that they needed to be really effective. Especially since so many of them happened off screen. I hated everything about that epilogue and am very much tempting just removing it from my book.
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Wed, Jul. 25th, 2007 09:08 pm (UTC)Was it just me or were the deaths handled poorly? I don't think any of them really had the proper amount of time and tension that they needed to be really effective. Especially since so many of them happened off screen.
I hated everything about that epilogue and am very much tempting just removing it from my book.