Smith, Cynthia Leitich - Eternal
Tue, Jun. 23rd, 2009 02:17 pmThis is set in the same world as Smith's Tantalize.
Miranda has always been a shy girl, but once she's turned into a vampire (or as she prefers, an eternal), she's suddenly the princess of the eternal world. Zachary's not so happy, given that he was the guardian angel who failed to prevent her transformation and subsequently lost his wings, but soon, he gets a chance to make amends while Miranda tries to hold down fort when her vampire father is away.
This has the same funny-yet-dark tone of Tantalize, albeit without all the food (woe). As with Tantalize, I am left somewhat baffled about how to react. A large part of this is the overall pacing of the book. The beginning felt slow to leap into the plot, although it contains elements that are necessary to the ending; I either wanted more romance or less so that what romance there was didn't feel as unexplained; I wanted more of Miranda's moral dilemmas and the development of them; and I wanted more of the secondary characters' development. Overall, I think the book just felt too short for me. There are a lot of interesting things going on in there, or there could be, if there were more room for Smith to breathe. And the odd thing is, I can't even highlight that many of the interesting things, since many of them are fairly standard to vampire books, from the vampire dilemma of drinking blood to human chattel to secret vampire alliances. But the way Smith writes them makes them feel different, and I especially like Miranda, who wavers between wanting to be the high school girl she used to be and the vampire princess she now is.
The guardian-angel-falls-for-ward is apparently another button of mine, despite my overall not understanding why immortal creatures would fall for high school girls. I think Smith does a fairly good job as to showing Zachary's awareness of the problems inherent in the relationship, although I flinched a few times about the watching her naked thing. For me, Smith manages to get away with not fleshing out the relationship between Zachary and Miranda because Zachary's POV and how he knows her is so strong that I could ignore that for Miranda, she's only known him for a few days.
I also had problems with the angel thing, which is par for the course. Smith takes the route in which angels and therefore Heaven and Hell are for everyone; "we believe in you even if you don't believe in us" (paraphrased). It gets around the issue of Buddhist angels and etc, but I'm not sure it's a solution that sits well with me; it feels too co-opting. Then again, I haven't quite come across a good solution to the angel-demon problem, except the manga version in which you take the names and the mythology and handwave the actual religious elements (or go for broke if you are Yuki Kaori). And that solution has its own set of problems.
All this said, these are really interesting books that make me want to poke at them. I do think Smith is still juggling pacing, tone, and character, but I enjoy how her vampire/shapeshifter/angel world feels different from others, even if I can't quite figure out how.
Plus, I liked the way she ended this. I am not sure most people will, but that is why I liked it so much.
Miranda has always been a shy girl, but once she's turned into a vampire (or as she prefers, an eternal), she's suddenly the princess of the eternal world. Zachary's not so happy, given that he was the guardian angel who failed to prevent her transformation and subsequently lost his wings, but soon, he gets a chance to make amends while Miranda tries to hold down fort when her vampire father is away.
This has the same funny-yet-dark tone of Tantalize, albeit without all the food (woe). As with Tantalize, I am left somewhat baffled about how to react. A large part of this is the overall pacing of the book. The beginning felt slow to leap into the plot, although it contains elements that are necessary to the ending; I either wanted more romance or less so that what romance there was didn't feel as unexplained; I wanted more of Miranda's moral dilemmas and the development of them; and I wanted more of the secondary characters' development. Overall, I think the book just felt too short for me. There are a lot of interesting things going on in there, or there could be, if there were more room for Smith to breathe. And the odd thing is, I can't even highlight that many of the interesting things, since many of them are fairly standard to vampire books, from the vampire dilemma of drinking blood to human chattel to secret vampire alliances. But the way Smith writes them makes them feel different, and I especially like Miranda, who wavers between wanting to be the high school girl she used to be and the vampire princess she now is.
The guardian-angel-falls-for-ward is apparently another button of mine, despite my overall not understanding why immortal creatures would fall for high school girls. I think Smith does a fairly good job as to showing Zachary's awareness of the problems inherent in the relationship, although I flinched a few times about the watching her naked thing. For me, Smith manages to get away with not fleshing out the relationship between Zachary and Miranda because Zachary's POV and how he knows her is so strong that I could ignore that for Miranda, she's only known him for a few days.
I also had problems with the angel thing, which is par for the course. Smith takes the route in which angels and therefore Heaven and Hell are for everyone; "we believe in you even if you don't believe in us" (paraphrased). It gets around the issue of Buddhist angels and etc, but I'm not sure it's a solution that sits well with me; it feels too co-opting. Then again, I haven't quite come across a good solution to the angel-demon problem, except the manga version in which you take the names and the mythology and handwave the actual religious elements (or go for broke if you are Yuki Kaori). And that solution has its own set of problems.
All this said, these are really interesting books that make me want to poke at them. I do think Smith is still juggling pacing, tone, and character, but I enjoy how her vampire/shapeshifter/angel world feels different from others, even if I can't quite figure out how.
Plus, I liked the way she ended this. I am not sure most people will, but that is why I liked it so much.