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Oyceter ([personal profile] oyceter) wrote2005-05-23 08:24 pm

Kinsale, Laura - For My Lady's Heart

(reread)

Mostly I reread this because I wanted to see if it would get better. Alas, no. It had all the potential to push every single one of my buttons, but it just never quite got there. This may be in part because of the sort-of-Old-English that Kinsale uses in the dialogue, and partly because I never quite get the sense of menace and threat that I should have if I am to believe in Melanthe's character.

Melanthe is the princess of Monteverde, one of the three warring kingdoms in Italy (the other two being Navona and Riata). The death of her husband means that there is a chance for either Navona or Riata to take over Monteverde through marriage, but all Melanthe wants to do is escape the political turmoil and retire to her childhood home of Bowland in England. Ruck somehow ends up protecting her.

Haha, I am too lazy to give good summary today.

I think originally I thought I would like the book because Melanthe is a pretty cold heroine. Being embroiled in the complex schemes of the Riata and the Navona, as well as the precious dowry she bears, has been enough to teach her that she should never show her emotions, never care about people. Eh, ok, I am strange, but this interests me. And while the book is on Melanthe learning to love and the like, which is a story that does interest me, it's more about her fear and her insecurity and her desire to flee. I'm not sure if she ever does overcome that. She just ends up finding a better protector in Ruck. I suppose a big part of the book is her learning to trust enough to depend on Ruck and not push him away when Navona comes for her, but that bit just doesn't work for me.

There's a distance from the characters that keeps me from being interested in their story. Also, I sort of resent the fact that Melanthe gives up Monteverde to keep Bowland and that Ruck gets a Secret Destiny. I hope I am not spoiling anything, as the whole set up with him as a nameless knight pretty much begs for a Secret Destiny.

Anyhow, I get the feeling that the book is about Melanthe finding a protector and being able to escape from that which made her dangerous and coveted in the first place, and while that is a perfectly fine story to tell, it just doesn't seem to be one I am very interested in right now.

Well, at the very least, this makes parts of Shadowheart (one of my favorite romances ever) make a whole lot more sense.

[identity profile] livinglaurel.livejournal.com 2005-05-23 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I hope I am not spoiling anything, as the whole set up with him as a nameless knight pretty much begs for a Secret Destiny.

Heee. (I just had this image of a Nameless Knight lugging a Secret Destiny behind him....)

[identity profile] livinglaurel.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, now you're making me think of keychain baubles. Pocket-sized but v shiny indeed....

[identity profile] graygirl.livejournal.com 2005-05-24 12:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love the moment when Ruck takes her to see the dragon in the woods. It took two tries for me to read this book; something the second time around clicked and I really enjoyed it.
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[personal profile] heresluck 2005-06-03 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm relieved there's someone else who doesn't like this one much. It's the only Kinsale I've sold back -- some of the others left me shaking my head a little at the On!Crack plots, but I could still imagine re-reading them. Not this one. Which was odd, because I, too, felt FMLH could and even should have been pushing my buttons, and yet it just... didn't. I had been attributing this largely to the quasi-middle-english, which did annoy me, but after reading your review I'm wondering if the language was just one aspect of the larger "distance from the characters" problem you've identified.

Hmm. Things to ponder.
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[personal profile] heresluck 2005-06-04 08:17 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I started reading romances again about a year and a half ago, due entirely to [livejournal.com profile] coffee_and_ink's romance conversion kit, with supplemental recs from [livejournal.com profile] oracne (Judith Ivory!). This has been both good and bad. It's been tremendously fun to read good romances, but every time I stray from their recommendations I find that I am reading UTTER CRAP. Gah.

I did just pick up the last two volumes of Brockway's latest trilogy; am I remembering right that you really liked the last one 'cause it's darker? I liked the first one fine -- it's slight, but well-done -- and am looking forward to finishing out the series, even though I anticipate rolling my eyes at some of the inevitable heroine-from-earlier-in-the-trilogy-is-pregnant! follow-up that you skewered so beautifully in your Rules For Heroines post.
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[personal profile] heresluck 2005-06-07 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, as I said, I've tried a few things not on the rec lists... and didn't like them. So I think every romance I've read, finished, and kept is by an author I found via mely or oracne (and most are specific books they mention), and thus I doubt I have any cool new info for you.

Totally agree with you about plot not being Brockway's strong point. But her characters are so much fun (for both charming and angsty values of "fun"), and her writing is so blessedly not-clunky (for the most part), that I am willing to cut her almost infinite slack on the plot thing.

I went on a Loretta Chase binge a while back -- found some of the reissues of her Regencies. I thought Isabella and The English Witch, in particular, were utterly charming. And she has a new one out -- Mr. Impossible, or whatever it is -- that I've already picked up and am looking forward to; I think that'll be one of my post-dissertation rewards. I didn't know she had a giant backlist, though; I may have to pursue her stuff a little less haphazardly. Anything you've particularly liked so far?