The general consensus, I think, is "Needed to be longer!" Actually, I can't help but think that Lo may have limited herself by specifically limiting herself to being a retelling of Cinderella, as the best parts are when she completely departs from Cinderella, and the Cinderella-centric parts are either typical or irritating. And I very much agree at how it seemed to be centered around the Huntress mythology, and then seemingly dropped that altogether.
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