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m. ([identity profile] coffeeandink.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] oyceter 2007-04-08 02:56 pm (UTC)

I like a lot about the relationship in "A Gift of Wings," but I felt the story was structurally flawed because the mystery plot and the romance plot worked entirely independently instead of reinforcing each other; the character developments and the mystery went in parallel, like two entirely different stories sharing the same space.

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